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Fallen

The rising sun has become the fallen star. It was when the moon shined no more. It was when the sun walked away into its shell. Then the rain came and washed all away into a deep valley.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/19/2012 4:50:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you James. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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