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Fall Time Freeze

Fall time and it’s freezing
Poles are cold
Walls are green
See the others sneezing

Time just seems to slip away
As the ruby trees wither
Rosemary streets slither
While the talons touch the season

Turning tides rise and fall
Timbers telling treasons
Cults eviscerate taverns
Tumbling rocks they stall

Emigrating egrids eagerly expostulate
Against snails in grass
Whilst gold changes brass
Monasteries monitor maneured man

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/26/2018 12:30:00 PM
Ryan, many of your lines resemble aliteration which I think is difficult to do even when you are trying. Well done. "Cults eviscerate taverns" made me smile, as this is in fact the time of year that they seem to be in there the most- possibly as it is the beginning of a new school year and the college crowd is finding each other. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Well done!
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