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Fall Time Freeze

Fall time and it’s freezing Poles are cold Walls are green See the others sneezing Time just seems to slip away As the ruby trees wither Rosemary streets slither While the talons touch the season Turning tides rise and fall Timbers telling treasons Cults eviscerate taverns Tumbling rocks they stall Emigrating egrids eagerly expostulate Against snails in grass Whilst gold changes brass Monasteries monitor maneured man

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/26/2018 12:30:00 PM

Ryan, many of your lines resemble aliteration which I think is difficult to do even when you are trying. Well done. "Cults eviscerate taverns" made me smile, as this is in fact the time of year that they seem to be in there the most- possibly as it is the beginning of a new school year and the college crowd is finding each other. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Well done!