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Fall - Three Haiku

FALL  (three Haiku) 

frosted lawn
black with sparrows
pecking 


gust of cold wind
blink of the eye
last leaf flutters down

snowy day
fox and geese
circle shrouded


Dave Austin

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Matthew Anish

December 12, 2011 at 2:19 PM

Fall has come to and end. You echo the season well in these short poems Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

November 16, 2011 at 9:18 PM

Daver, i hope that one last leaf travels all the way to Texas... we sure can use, a hint of fall...It happens to be summer down here((LOL)) I don't think Texas, doesn't know the meaning of SEASON CHANGE... hehhe! Well glad i'm not the FOX... geese are scarier when they are cold.... all 3 are lovley...Take care,..p.d.

November 16, 2011 at 11:45 AM

Interesting imagery makes for good reading. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

November 15, 2011 at 8:25 PM

daver, I saw these at my hotmail when you posted them at PFT but I bet you did not get my message I sent you. I REALLY like them. Especially the first two. the middle one best of all!

Carolyn Devonshire

November 15, 2011 at 12:24 PM

Very lovely images of fall, Daver. Really enjoyed thinking of the snow-covered lawn "black with sparrows." The second verse reminded me of the brevity of life and the last one gave me a big smile. Very nicely done! Love, Carolyn