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Fall Senyru.

Forlorn fibers fly
ruby refuse recoiling
morose motors mulch


FALL.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/21/2010 6:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Gerard. Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 6/20/2010 9:25:00 PM

Nice write with a lot going on in your thought process to bring this one to light! Congrats on your win. Dan C

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2010 5:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Gerard. This must be one I haven't seen yet!

Date: 6/19/2010 1:38:00 PM

Good use of alliteration. Liked this the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/17/2010 3:47:00 PM

Congratulations, Gerard! How have you been? RE: Jimmy, was it the SM failure? his e-mail is - andersonjimmy19@yahoo.com. He'll be very happy to hear from you.. loves mail as you can imagine. Thanks for the comments..I just love Fall!! Peace, love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2010 9:02:00 PM

Congrats Gerard on your success in my contest.. with this wonderful write and alliteration too..always appreciate your support of my contests.. with luv.. "Sweetheart"

Date: 6/14/2010 11:29:00 AM

Nice use of imagery and alliteration. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Vikes didn't get a new stadium but want one--the Metrodome was built for them and they reap most of the perks--so it will be a hard sell. Rumor has it that Farve will be back--don't expect anything concrete until they get done with preseason camp. The injuries are starting to pack up for the Twins. Hope it doesn't lead to a slide. Bye for now. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/14/2010 7:42:00 AM

These last two poems of yours, are filled with ceative, and unsual flair! Well done once again.......and before I close, many thanks for your kind comments. They mean a lot coming from one who writes so well! :) Thank you! ~ Carrie

Sean Kelly

Date: 6/14/2010 3:56:00 AM

Best of luck , GK Jr. , and this should do well for you . Thought for a moment , you were writing about our Rugby Team .....