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Fall Haiku

propelled by the wind
dry, brittle brown leaves sc-rape
across my driveway


11/11/11

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Poet Destroyer A

April 15, 2013 at 7:46 PM

yes one 100 % nature... the sc-rape and all... xox~ PD

Skat A

March 7, 2013 at 11:19 AM

Susan Black, love your poem~Yours truly *SKAT

Carrie Richards

March 2, 2013 at 9:06 AM

I loved this.......!! Sometimes the short forms get less attention, but have the most heart! I can see the painting in my mind's eye! Nicely done!!

Poet Destroyer A

March 1, 2013 at 9:14 PM

Susan, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD

Kim Merryman

March 21, 2012 at 4:04 PM

Nice haiku, Susan. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 19, 2012 at 6:19 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

March 18, 2012 at 5:20 PM

I know this one from before. But I don't think it occurred to me before. it's also raping the driveway by showing that word with Sc. Truly a good haiku of yours, Susan. your best I bet it really is. hey thanks for my win in your contest. A favor. Could you look at my series of poems your contest inspired from me. I want to see the one of MINE you truly liked the best (if you had seen one of them in your contest) LUv, Andrea (did I tell you the one I gave you was Joe's idea? haha)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 16, 2012 at 9:20 PM

congrats Susan on another top ten win for brilliant lines of beautiful Haiku luv.

Ralph Taylor

March 16, 2012 at 8:33 AM

Congrats on your win, Sue. Excellent piece. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

March 15, 2012 at 10:57 PM

SUSAN, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Nathan D.

November 20, 2011 at 11:06 AM

is this metaphoric for a fart

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 18, 2011 at 11:49 AM

Thank you for your kind comments Susan. Have a wonderful weekend. Live, Love, and Laugh. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

November 17, 2011 at 11:17 PM

just coming back here to reread this one. I just love how the Scrape word gives that scraping effect!

Sara Kendrick

November 15, 2011 at 10:54 AM

This one made me feel the scr__pe...That is the way it is..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for the kind review...Sara

Bl Devnath

November 14, 2011 at 1:23 PM

Wonderful haiku, just read and enjoyed. Wishing you best of luck for contest. bl

Poet Destroyer A

November 12, 2011 at 9:30 PM

Susan,, nice haiku.. Enjoyed your poem~ Thank you for sharing. Have yourself a wonderful night.. Take care ;-) ..LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

November 12, 2011 at 12:55 PM

an awesome traditional haiku, Susan. I just love the imagery you portrayed here. how is it going?I am letting myself unwind here after my bad night and now will go to the gym. Luv,Andrea