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Fall Haiku

propelled by the wind dry, brittle brown leaves sc-rape across my driveway 11/11/11

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/15/2013 7:46:00 PM

yes one 100 % nature... the sc-rape and all... xox~ PD

Skat A

Date: 3/7/2013 11:19:00 AM

Susan Black, love your poem~Yours truly *SKAT

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/2/2013 9:06:00 AM

I loved this.......!! Sometimes the short forms get less attention, but have the most heart! I can see the painting in my mind's eye! Nicely done!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/1/2013 9:14:00 PM

Susan, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/21/2012 4:04:00 PM

Nice haiku, Susan. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 6:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2012 5:20:00 PM

I know this one from before. But I don't think it occurred to me before. it's also raping the driveway by showing that word with Sc. Truly a good haiku of yours, Susan. your best I bet it really is. hey thanks for my win in your contest. A favor. Could you look at my series of poems your contest inspired from me. I want to see the one of MINE you truly liked the best (if you had seen one of them in your contest) LUv, Andrea (did I tell you the one I gave you was Joe's idea? haha)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 9:20:00 PM

congrats Susan on another top ten win for brilliant lines of beautiful Haiku luv.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/16/2012 8:33:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Sue. Excellent piece. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2012 10:57:00 PM

SUSAN, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Nathan D.

Date: 11/20/2011 11:06:00 AM

is this metaphoric for a fart

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 11:49:00 AM

Thank you for your kind comments Susan. Have a wonderful weekend. Live, Love, and Laugh. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 11:17:00 PM

just coming back here to reread this one. I just love how the Scrape word gives that scraping effect!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/15/2011 10:54:00 AM

This one made me feel the scr__pe...That is the way it is..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Thanks for the kind review...Sara

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/14/2011 1:23:00 PM

Wonderful haiku, just read and enjoyed. Wishing you best of luck for contest. bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/12/2011 9:30:00 PM

Susan,, nice haiku.. Enjoyed your poem~ Thank you for sharing. Have yourself a wonderful night.. Take care ;-) ..LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/12/2011 12:55:00 PM

an awesome traditional haiku, Susan. I just love the imagery you portrayed here. how is it going?I am letting myself unwind here after my bad night and now will go to the gym. Luv,Andrea

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/12/2011 11:13:00 AM

I'm glad I stopped by to read your poem...it's one of the best!! It's nice to read haiku, I enjoy them a lot! Congrats on a job well done!!

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 11/12/2011 9:53:00 AM

A wonderful Haiku Susan, very visual. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl