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Fall For Someone That Want To See You Rise

Too many want want want So they will take take take! For your own well-being Get away from them Fall for someone that want to see you rise Fall for someone who want more for you Not more from you Let the cure of simplicity be A reminder that love can exist in the right amount! Loving in the wrong direction can be an obstacle Caught up in passion can become didactical A lesson for some Because loving in the wrong direction can become a burden! Fall for someone that want to see you rise Fall for someone who want more for you Not more from you Let the cure of simplicity be A reminder that love can exist in the right amount! Mark Frank Copyright 2022

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Date: 6/8/2022 4:25:00 PM
that is it, line by line the hammer falls, accept only those who wish to see your dreams come to fruition....spot on Mark
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Marcheleo Marcheleo
Date: 6/10/2022 10:12:00 AM
Thank you Timothy. I appreciate your words.
Date: 6/3/2022 2:21:00 PM
“Fall for someone that want to see you rise Fall for someone who want more for you”…loved these lines, Dear Poet… so true! BW ~ Mala
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Marcheleo Marcheleo
Date: 6/5/2022 10:35:00 AM
Good day Thank you for your words.
Date: 5/11/2022 2:10:00 PM
Great one Mark. True love is wanting to see someone rise :)
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Marcheleo Marcheleo
Date: 5/22/2022 10:54:00 AM
Thank you my dear...
Date: 5/11/2022 11:46:00 AM
Hello Mark Frank, You know Mark this is good advice. It will be my fav. These words have spoken to me. enjoy your day my friend.
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Marcheleo Marcheleo
Date: 5/22/2022 10:55:00 AM
Thank you my dear...

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