Fall For Someone That Want To See You Rise

Too many want want want
So they will take take take!
For your own well-being 
Get away from them

Fall for someone that want to see you rise
Fall for someone who want more for you
Not more from you
Let the cure of simplicity be
A reminder that love can exist in the right amount!

Loving in the wrong direction can be an obstacle
Caught up in passion can become didactical
A lesson for some
Because loving in the wrong direction can become a burden!

Fall for someone that want to see you rise
Fall for someone who want more for you
Not more from you
Let the cure of simplicity be
A reminder that love can exist in the right amount!

Mark Frank

Copyright 2022
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Ray Avatar
June 8, 2022 at 4:25 PM
that is it, line by line the hammer falls, accept only those who wish to see your dreams come to fruition....spot on Mark
Frank Avatar
June 10, 2022 at 10:12 AM
Thank you Timothy. I appreciate your words.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 2:21 PM
“Fall for someone that want to see you rise Fall for someone who want more for you”…loved these lines, Dear Poet… so true! BW ~ Mala
Frank Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 10:35 AM
Good day Thank you for your words.
Sands Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 2:10 PM
Great one Mark. True love is wanting to see someone rise :)
Frank Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 10:54 AM
Thank you my dear...
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 11, 2022 at 11:46 AM
Hello Mark Frank, You know Mark this is good advice. It will be my fav. These words have spoken to me. enjoy your day my friend.
Frank Avatar
May 22, 2022 at 10:55 AM
Thank you my dear...
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