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Contest:   Autumn Haiku

Fall fancies

faint essence exudes 
gentle generosity 
I’m swept by your scent 

carnival raiment 
gorgeously garbed in motley 
I’m lost in your charms 

following each leaf 
landing lightly down below 
I’m falling for you
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Carmack Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 7:28 PM
I like this style. I hope it places.
Radice Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 8:22 AM
A clever write Margarita, particularly with the meaning of the word 'fall'. I enjoyed the read. Cheers - Gary
Lillico  Avatar
September 28, 2024 at 9:13 AM
Thank you Gary.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 9:41 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Fall fancies" Haiku writes. I love fall with the pretty colors. It will be here very soon. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed/fun weekend................
Lillico  Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 9:58 AM
Thank you Paula. I am very much attuned with the Fall as well.
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