Fall Categories - Oddquain

Falls
off the branch
twisting in midair;
end of a season of life.
Down,
down,
adjusts and sticks the landing;
still eight more to go.
Nonchalant,
leaves.

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Oddquain and reverse: 1/3/5/7/1, 1/7/5/3/1
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Hankins Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 8:45 AM
a most interesting form, Jeff.
Kyser Avatar
October 26, 2022 at 10:51 AM
Credit to Melani U again. She’s the trend setter. That’s a double. The standard is just 1,3,5,7,1
Bothwell Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 8:44 PM
cool as a cucumber, when you heard that the last time
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