Fall Away

it falls away
never built to last
one hangs on
while the other fasts
the words dry up
and disappear
soon, it hasn't been weeks
it's been years
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 31, 2010 at 8:49 PM
well penned piece, J.B.
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March 31, 2010 at 8:31 PM
Ain't that the truth. Really nice poem.
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