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trees shed hued plumage, falling reckless to ground floor… landscape’s masquerade. Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey Second Place Winner ~ "Seasons Senryu” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Linda-Marie Bariana July 1, 2010

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Date: 6/21/2010 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Caryl. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/21/2010 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2010 8:44:00 PM
I really like the idea of the leaves as a masquerade for the landscape! Well written. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 6/19/2010 1:15:00 PM
Interesting perspective captured in just three lines. Congratulations on placing second in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen
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Date: 6/17/2010 4:29:00 PM
What a beatiful and colorful Senryu!
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Date: 6/17/2010 8:09:00 AM
Lovely! Congratulations on your success ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 6/17/2010 7:07:00 AM
Very nice, Caryl. A big congratulations to you!
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Date: 6/16/2010 8:39:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your success in my contest.. with luv.. Linda-Marie.. appreciate your support always..
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Date: 6/15/2010 8:17:00 AM
This is a beauty, Carl...."falling reckless" love that description! Good luck!!!
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Date: 6/15/2010 3:43:00 AM
A great haiku with nice images. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 6/15/2010 12:11:00 AM
excellent poem, love it harry
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Date: 6/14/2010 9:07:00 PM
Beautifully done, Caryl. Good luck in the contest! LUv, andrea
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Date: 6/14/2010 7:50:00 PM
Nice one, good luck on the contest, enjoyed this write...P.D.
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