Caryl Muzzey Poet Senryu

Fall

trees shed hued plumage,
falling reckless to ground floor…
landscape’s masquerade.

Copyright © 2010  By Caryl S. Muzzey

Second Place Winner ~ "Seasons Senryu” Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Linda-Marie Bariana
July 1, 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 21, 2010 at 9:02 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Caryl. May you have many more features. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown June 21, 2010 at 5:38 AM Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Seasons Senryu" Caryl. Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak June 20, 2010 at 8:44 PM I really like the idea of the leaves as a masquerade for the landscape! Well written. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C

June 19, 2010 at 1:15 PM Interesting perspective captured in just three lines. Congratulations on placing second in Linda-Marie's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen

Marie Harrison June 17, 2010 at 4:29 PM What a beatiful and colorful Senryu!

Sharon Tideswell June 17, 2010 at 8:09 AM Lovely! Congratulations on your success ~ Sharon :)

Andrea Dietrich June 17, 2010 at 7:07 AM Very nice, Caryl. A big congratulations to you!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 16, 2010 at 8:39 PM Congrats Caryl on your success in my contest.. with luv.. Linda-Marie.. appreciate your support always..

Carrie Richards June 15, 2010 at 8:17 AM This is a beauty, Carl...."falling reckless" love that description! Good luck!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 15, 2010 at 3:43 AM A great haiku with nice images. Good luck in the contest

Harry Horsman June 15, 2010 at 12:11 AM excellent poem, love it harry

Andrea Dietrich June 14, 2010 at 9:07 PM Beautifully done, Caryl. Good luck in the contest! LUv, andrea

Poet Destroyer A June 14, 2010 at 7:50 PM Nice one, good luck on the contest, enjoyed this write...P.D.