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Mirror, mirror on the wall It`s not my spring, it`s my fall But despite my old age I have turned a new page I don`t care anymore Whether I am too fat or small My wrinkles are my victories Despite hardships and enemies

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Date: 1/9/2025 10:59:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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Date: 11/4/2024 3:31:00 AM
Loved it. We grow old but we survive.
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Date: 11/3/2024 4:54:00 PM
Yes, great way to look at things. The mirror tells us we’ve lived!
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Date: 11/3/2024 11:18:00 AM
Wrinkles as victories? Why not. Have a great Sunday Vesna
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Date: 11/3/2024 9:38:00 AM
Amen to that, Vesna! All our "wrinkles" are hard-won and well-deserved.
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