Fall

fall cooler days enjoy apple cider paint pumpkin faces colored leaves everywhere shorter golden sunset sweaters being worn squirrels get nuts pretty mums apples red Date Written:9/3/2021 2 Place MERSE - Beauty Of Fall Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Malabika Ray Choudhury

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/26/2021 8:47:00 PM

Dear Paula, you’ve penned a beautiful depiction of Fall. Lovely, lively and delicious imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Mala’s contest. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/29/2021 10:23:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this "Fall" write. Have blessed autumn day...................

Eve Roper

Date: 9/26/2021 11:03:00 AM

Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , Paula , congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/27/2021 9:20:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like this write. It is an honor to have this win. I love the fall. Have blessed day...................

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/26/2021 6:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/26/2021 8:25:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed this Fall write. It is an honor to have this win in your wonderful contest. I love the fall time of the year. Have blessed day...................

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/3/2021 11:27:00 AM

Hello Paula, I love apple cider I enjoy it. Fall has the pretty colors spread. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/3/2021 4:14:00 PM

Hello Paula, I have never had apple cider iced. Yet I know I would like it. Hugs. Enjoy your weekend.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/3/2021 12:51:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this Fall write. I love apple cider hot or iced. Have blessed day/weekend.................