Jan Allison Poet Verse

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Fall

FALL
autumn
harvest time

farmers are busy
gathering ripened crops
to feed us through winter time

“transition from summer season”

Pyramids Poetry Contest

Sponsored by Joseph May

09/11/20

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Jennifer Proxenos September 21, 2020 at 7:45 AM Hi Jan- congratulations my friend on your winning poem - I love seasonal writes. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Jan Allison September 22, 2020 at 1:42 PM thanks Jennifer:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2020 at 1:55 PM Very exact definition for it, Jan. Congrats on the win . How is your weekend going? Jan Allison September 20, 2020 at 3:21 PM thanks Andrea, weekend going fab hope yours is too:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 20, 2020 at 12:06 PM - Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison September 20, 2020 at 3:20 PM thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May September 20, 2020 at 11:58 AM Very nicely done Jan, Congrats on your win.. Jan Allison September 20, 2020 at 3:19 PM thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Mark Koplin September 14, 2020 at 4:03 AM I love this time of year, the combines are buzzing all around right now. I just wished it lasted a bit longer before this long cold winter hits. Jan Allison September 20, 2020 at 3:19 PM we have unusually warm weather at the moment, i love this time of year:-) hugs Jan xx

Paghunda Zahid September 12, 2020 at 11:58 AM Good one. Good luck for the contest Jan Allison September 12, 2020 at 1:05 PM thanks Paghundra:-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands September 11, 2020 at 1:28 PM Great one Jan! :) Jan Allison September 11, 2020 at 3:08 PM thanks Heidi hope u r on the road to recovery:-) hugs Jan x

Carolyn Devonshire September 11, 2020 at 11:40 AM Jan, you did a terrific job painting the sights we see in Autumn. Very nice use of this form. Best wishes for a win in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn Jan Allison September 11, 2020 at 2:59 PM Thanks Carolyn i have not written it before it was fun:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta September 11, 2020 at 11:28 AM Nicely done, although you could top it off with "Ah!" Aloha! Rico Jan Allison September 11, 2020 at 2:59 PM thanks Rico:-) hugs jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos September 11, 2020 at 10:51 AM Hi Jan, this is a beautiful poem. I thought of trying to enter this contest , it will be a first for me, but think I should give it a shot. I really love yours. Hugs Blessings,, Jan Allison September 11, 2020 at 2:45 PM Give it a go Jennifer, it was my first attempt too:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen September 11, 2020 at 10:49 AM - Autumn menu with food on all plates ... lovely written, Jan :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - (I was infected by your poem "THE PROPOSAL" earlier today :))) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison September 11, 2020 at 2:45 PM thanks Anne Lise, just read your poem so glad you were tempted to write the triple rhyme poem:-) hugs jan xx