Fall

Autumn’s breezes blow
Gently arriving yearly
Allowing changes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 7, 2008 at 10:06 AM
Fitting poem for this time of year. I really like the last line. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen
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August 14, 2008 at 4:28 AM
Gentle and relaxing, Mike. This is very effective. Love, Daver
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August 13, 2008 at 2:14 PM
Lovely poem....I can already see the colors, before they are even here! Fondly, ...Carrie
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August 13, 2008 at 8:17 AM
Love every write about the oncoming season. I feel the wind in this one and I am so ready. Wonderful haiku. Love, Shar
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August 13, 2008 at 6:33 AM
Perfect flow , Michael... And YES !!...that IS you mentioned ..... Keep up the great work .....
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August 13, 2008 at 6:24 AM
Michael - what a peaceful haiku - The winds of change forever affect our daily Lives - God Bless
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August 13, 2008 at 5:06 AM
My most favorite time of year, this little beauty show it's charm - lovely, love Kristin
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