Notes About The Poem

Fake Facades

As your heart breaks

        fake facades crumble into dust;

      but you’re ready to forgive past mistakes

        and reestablish trust.


(Rhyme)


06,10,2019
"Ready To Forgive"
Writing Challenge, June 2019, Crumbling Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Dear Heart
Contest Judged:  6/24/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Watt Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 1:47 AM
Emile, it takes a big heart to be broken and yet be willing to forgive and reestablish trust. But when "fake facades crumble into dust", truth and honesty can emerge. Powerful words ~ John
Pinet Avatar
March 20, 2020 at 9:20 AM
Thanks so much John, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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