Faithlessness

I do not fear the messiness of death—
The cold, dreamless sleep, ghastly blue.
What I fear at my last breath
Is total separation from you.

All that we had together, all that we knew
Will be as if they never were, not even a blur.
I cannot abide the thought, nor think it true 
For such to be seems to me an ungodly slur.

Some atheists say this fear I artlessly confess
Explains why man had to make Gods.
Even so, my life-long faith eases my distress.
It sweetly whispers:  faithless claims are frauds.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Andresen Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 1:01 PM
- A very well written poem, Paul - Always a pleasure to read your poems! - Thank you for the year 2014 - looking forward to a new year with my friends here that "soup" - Happy new year 2015 !!! - // Anne-Lise :)
Schneiter Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 3:40 PM
Your supportive words are music to my ears. Thank you, thank you. May 2015 be one of your happiest years ever.
Mehta Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 7:24 AM
Very inspiring and informative write on faith
Schneiter Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 10:47 PM
I'm grateful to you, Dr. Mehta, for your kind and supportive words; in fact, I cherish them.
Fleming Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 1:24 AM
Nice poem, Paul. "Faith" is the greatest quality we can aspire to attain in this "self-denied" materialistic world of self-indulgence. :) john.
Schneiter Avatar
December 27, 2014 at 3:04 PM
John: Thank you for your kind words, as well as for your insightful comment about "faith being the greatest quality we can aspire to . . . ."
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