Faithfully

F orever searching
A lways in need of God
I ntellect too high to see
T he simple truth for all but me
H opefully someday I’ll know
F ulfillment in my heart will show
U nlock this hidden door of mine so I may see the truth behind
L ove will come in greater splendor
L onging for caring arms so tender
Y earnings rewarded  love will be accorded
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Khan Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 6:57 AM
Great win..Congrats :)
Platt Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 6:51 PM
Thank you, Saba. It is nice to be appreciated. Regards, Colin.
Platt Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 1:44 AM
Thank you, Upma. I do my best. I like to think people get pleasure out of the little poetry I make. Regards, Colin.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 17, 2014 at 12:47 AM
Very lovely acrostic Colin! Congrats on huge win!
A   Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 10:13 PM
Hi Colin, glad you enjoyed the win. Thanks for stopping by my blog. Your comment made my day and time here worth the while... Linda
Platt Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 10:24 PM
Thank you, Linda. I will try to be here more often, but with the wife working and me having to drive her, my time is limited. I am in awe of some of your poems. I can't see me getting to your level, but I will try. Regards, Colin.
Smith Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 8:52 PM
Congrats on a great win, Colin.. Hugs.. Arlene
Platt Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 9:02 PM
Thank you, Arlene. I never expected to even place. This is my first contest on here so it is indeed a pleasure. Regards, Colin.
A   Avatar
July 16, 2014 at 5:53 PM
Hi Colin, once again... Congratulations! Thank you for enjoying my contest, stop by my latest blog "Tanka you, but no tanka you :)" If you'd like, or have time! No Matter, enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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July 16, 2014 at 8:11 PM
Thank you, Linda. Sorry about the delay, I am having trouble with my email. outlook won't let me have access sometimes. Also I am away most of the day. I feel honored. That is something I rarely feel. I hope to be able to spend more time on the site in future. Best Wishes. and thanks again. Colin.
A   Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 10:32 PM
Colin, stopping by to thank you for the reply... A little late... XOX..PD
A  Avatar
July 7, 2014 at 7:57 PM
Colin,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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July 8, 2014 at 7:07 AM
Thank you, skat, I am at present putting my book on Smashwords so I haven't had time to post on Poetry soup. I will look at your work as soon as I can. Regards, Colin.
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June 27, 2014 at 5:35 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Colin. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
Platt Avatar
June 27, 2014 at 10:58 PM
Thank you, Faye. I am enjoying the experience of poetry here. I like poems that I can relate to, some are a little complicated to understand, but I will try. Regards, Colin.
A   Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 9:18 PM
Hello Colin,,, Thank you for the comment on my comment. I am looking forward, in hearing from you again. You will enjoy this site, I guaranteed or my fun poetry name isn't PD :) I highly recommend the blog area, there you can read what is hot, and what is going on here at The Poetry Soup. If you like click on some of the side features ((-UNDER- the area where it reads "Member Poets/Poems")) to the left of this comment. -That's my favorite soup section. If you scroll down to where it reads "Contests" you will enjoy the "Contest Winners: Member " feature. Click away, and check out what's cooking. Enjoy reading and following, many of the incoming winners. "I SURE DO." Please feel free to comment and read any of my poems, if you'd like. My poems are not the easiest to understand:) I'm still learning myself. However, I enjoy encouraging others. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I might be able to help, if not I will recommend someone. Take Care~LINDA~
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June 24, 2014 at 9:28 PM
Thank you, Linda. I will check out what you said. I wish there was more time in the day to do all the things we need to do. But all we can do is or best. Regards, Colin.
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June 24, 2014 at 9:13 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Colin :) - I choose your first well written acrostic poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Platt Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 7:05 PM
Thank you, Anne. I love this site. People are very friendly. I do like to keep it simple and drama free. Life should be drama free but it usually isn't. This site relieves the stress.
Nance Avatar
June 24, 2014 at 8:17 AM
Hey Colin, What a great acrostic, Well done, I noticed your question to Poet destroyer, there is not an option for a Naani in the forms posting, it is most often posted under Verse. Welcome to poetry soup, have fun with it and write on =)
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June 24, 2014 at 7:02 PM
Thank you, Casarah, and thank you for the Nanni reply. I will post one soon. Enjoy your day.
A   Avatar
June 23, 2014 at 11:22 PM
Colin,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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June 23, 2014 at 11:32 PM
Thank you, Linda. I am new here so it takes a while to get around in here especially at my age. I love the way the site is arranged. I know I will enjoy it. One thing I can't find is the Nanni form of poetry when posting? Regards, Colin.
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