Faithfully

F orever searching
A lways in need of God
I ntellect too high to see
T he simple truth for all but me
H opefully someday I’ll know
F ulfillment in my heart will show
U nlock this hidden door of mine so I may see the truth behind
L ove will come in greater splendor
L onging for caring arms so tender
Y earnings rewarded  love will be accorded
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 7/17/2014 6:57:00 AM
Great win..Congrats :)
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Colin James Platt
Date: 7/17/2014 6:51:00 PM
Thank you, Saba. It is nice to be appreciated. Regards, Colin.
Date: 7/17/2014 1:44:00 AM
Thank you, Upma. I do my best. I like to think people get pleasure out of the little poetry I make. Regards, Colin.
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Date: 7/17/2014 12:47:00 AM
Very lovely acrostic Colin! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 7/16/2014 10:13:00 PM
Hi Colin, glad you enjoyed the win. Thanks for stopping by my blog. Your comment made my day and time here worth the while... Linda
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Colin James Platt
Date: 7/16/2014 10:24:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. I will try to be here more often, but with the wife working and me having to drive her, my time is limited. I am in awe of some of your poems. I can't see me getting to your level, but I will try. Regards, Colin.
Date: 7/16/2014 8:52:00 PM
Congrats on a great win, Colin.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Colin James Platt
Date: 7/16/2014 9:02:00 PM
Thank you, Arlene. I never expected to even place. This is my first contest on here so it is indeed a pleasure. Regards, Colin.
Date: 7/16/2014 5:53:00 PM
Hi Colin, once again... Congratulations! Thank you for enjoying my contest, stop by my latest blog "Tanka you, but no tanka you :)" If you'd like, or have time! No Matter, enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Colin James Platt
Date: 7/16/2014 8:11:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. Sorry about the delay, I am having trouble with my email. outlook won't let me have access sometimes. Also I am away most of the day. I feel honored. That is something I rarely feel. I hope to be able to spend more time on the site in future. Best Wishes. and thanks again. Colin.
Date: 7/14/2014 10:32:00 PM
Colin, stopping by to thank you for the reply... A little late... XOX..PD
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Date: 7/7/2014 7:57:00 PM
Colin,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Colin James Platt
Date: 7/8/2014 7:07:00 AM
Thank you, skat, I am at present putting my book on Smashwords so I haven't had time to post on Poetry soup. I will look at your work as soon as I can. Regards, Colin.
Date: 6/27/2014 5:35:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Colin. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Colin James Platt
Date: 6/27/2014 10:58:00 PM
Thank you, Faye. I am enjoying the experience of poetry here. I like poems that I can relate to, some are a little complicated to understand, but I will try. Regards, Colin.
Date: 6/24/2014 9:18:00 PM
Hello Colin,,, Thank you for the comment on my comment. I am looking forward, in hearing from you again. You will enjoy this site, I guaranteed or my fun poetry name isn't PD :) I highly recommend the blog area, there you can read what is hot, and what is going on here at The Poetry Soup. If you like click on some of the side features ((-UNDER- the area where it reads "Member Poets/Poems")) to the left of this comment. -That's my favorite soup section. If you scroll down to where it reads "Contests" you will enjoy the "Contest Winners: Member " feature. Click away, and check out what's cooking. Enjoy reading and following, many of the incoming winners. "I SURE DO." Please feel free to comment and read any of my poems, if you'd like. My poems are not the easiest to understand:) I'm still learning myself. However, I enjoy encouraging others. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I might be able to help, if not I will recommend someone. Take Care~LINDA~
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Colin James Platt
Date: 6/24/2014 9:28:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. I will check out what you said. I wish there was more time in the day to do all the things we need to do. But all we can do is or best. Regards, Colin.
Date: 6/24/2014 9:13:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Colin :) - I choose your first well written acrostic poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Colin James Platt
Date: 6/24/2014 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, Anne. I love this site. People are very friendly. I do like to keep it simple and drama free. Life should be drama free but it usually isn't. This site relieves the stress.
Date: 6/24/2014 8:17:00 AM
Hey Colin, What a great acrostic, Well done, I noticed your question to Poet destroyer, there is not an option for a Naani in the forms posting, it is most often posted under Verse. Welcome to poetry soup, have fun with it and write on =)
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Colin James Platt
Date: 6/24/2014 7:02:00 PM
Thank you, Casarah, and thank you for the Nanni reply. I will post one soon. Enjoy your day.
Date: 6/23/2014 11:22:00 PM
Colin,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Colin James Platt
Date: 6/23/2014 11:32:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. I am new here so it takes a while to get around in here especially at my age. I love the way the site is arranged. I know I will enjoy it. One thing I can't find is the Nanni form of poetry when posting? Regards, Colin.
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