Faithful son

He took his Mom shopping, so she could walk with a cart
She had cognitive decline, and failure of the heart.
He took her in a wheelchair on the river asphalt path
He took over the taxes, because she couldn't do the math.

He drove her to the doctors, cancer, cardiac and more
He cleaned up the dishes, he vacuumed the kitchen floor
He took out the trash, managed all the bills
No time for things he liked to do, like cycling up the hills.

No time to read new science, he felt sorry for himself
Always in a rearguard action against declining health
But he thinks of the many years, from the age of two
When she did all this and wrote books, an ethic to be true.

But there's a twist, though others see him as faithful son
He attracted bad guys attention and then hope was none.
Trouble found Mom's doorstep, in some ways he's to blame
A criminal attractor, Mom paid for his past stain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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March 21, 2026 at 8:58 AM
Great poem Gideon....l felt happy while reading thinking what a good son he was and then disappointed and sad as l read the last stanza! Well written! Debx
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March 21, 2026 at 5:01 PM
I appreciate your comment. It's a situation that lots of people, sons and daughters, are in (minus the last verse).
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