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Faithful Footle

she sings
new hymns

of hope
and faith

in sky
she looks

and prays
her dreams

she lives
in love

with hands
so clean

01.30.2021

Copyright © JC Brul | Year Posted 2021

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February 1, 2021 at 10:53 AM

Love this! So nicely. Composed. Footless can keep me awake nights jugg Inggling words. Can just picture you putting this together. I didn’t know that could be done! Nice character you depicted here!

Andrea Dietrich

January 31, 2021 at 8:23 AM

I just saw Brian's blog, so all this time I thought the footles had to rhyme! Congrats, I see you got a win with this set. Way to go!!

Andrea Dietrich

January 30, 2021 at 10:20 AM

hey they don't rhyme! But you wrote a poem of someone with great faith! It's hard to do with only 2-syllable lines.

January 31, 2021 at 10:36 PM

Thank you Andrea...I just experimented with that non-rhyming type as I find it hard to do with rhymes..

January 30, 2021 at 2:33 AM

i like your unique style of the footle form, its wonderful to see how Brian's form has evolved:-) hugs Jan xx

January 31, 2021 at 10:35 PM

Thank you Jan, I am no good with rhymes..so tried non-rhyming haha...Best regards..

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