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Faithful Footle

she sings new hymns of hope and faith in sky she looks and prays her dreams she lives in love with hands so clean 01.30.2021

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 2/1/2021 10:53:00 AM

Love this! So nicely. Composed. Footless can keep me awake nights jugg Inggling words. Can just picture you putting this together. I didn’t know that could be done! Nice character you depicted here!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/31/2021 8:23:00 AM

I just saw Brian's blog, so all this time I thought the footles had to rhyme! Congrats, I see you got a win with this set. Way to go!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2021 10:20:00 AM

hey they don't rhyme! But you wrote a poem of someone with great faith! It's hard to do with only 2-syllable lines.

Jcb Brul
Date: 1/31/2021 10:36:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...I just experimented with that non-rhyming type as I find it hard to do with rhymes..

Jan Allison

Date: 1/30/2021 2:33:00 AM

i like your unique style of the footle form, its wonderful to see how Brian's form has evolved:-) hugs Jan xx

Jcb Brul
Date: 1/31/2021 10:35:00 PM

Thank you Jan, I am no good with rhymes..so tried non-rhyming haha...Best regards..