Faithful Companions

Aches and pains, my back they rend
     Day and night without end
  To these I painstakingly attend
         Faithful companions 
       Would that they mend!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Laurie Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 1:28 AM
Hello Gershon … dunno about friend, but certainly faithful and seems to join us as we begin to age - thanks Gershon - Lindsay
Wolf Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Personally, I'd settle for less faith and more friendship on their part! lol. Thanks, Lindsay.
Krutsinger Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 9:45 PM
You have prayers from a Kansas my friend.
Wolf Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 9:56 AM
Send a cure from Kansas too while you're at it! :) gw
Theraven Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 1:18 PM
Gershon, It pains me to read this poem of these two companions. FWIW I suffer them too. Lower back pain is often caused by inflammation of the tiny piriformis muscle. This muscle presses on the sciatic nerve. Turmeric, aloe vera, or better still St. John's Wort all work for neuropathic pain. -Richard
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 6:51 PM
Thank you for your suggestions and support, Richard! :) gw
Adams Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 8:54 AM
perhaps they are faithful but certainly not friends... not of mine anyway... I have those same pains, it seems they like to hang around... hugs
Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 9:17 AM
You know, I agree with you more and more every time I look at this poem, so I've now changed it, though the original title still works. THANK YOU! :) gw
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