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Faithful

Nice roses or chocolates I seldom see from the man who long ago married me. But I cannot complain, and that’s because the way he is today he always was! He offered me a life to share with him. And we’re still standing though some times were grim. I’ve never caught my husband making eyes at other gals. He’s not one of those guys! He’s kind of shy, but he can get quite loud if someone’s trashing me. That’s not allowed. Hard-working and dependable is he. But he is faithful, most importantly. Written 4/21/2016 For the Loyalty Contest of Broken Wings Using rhyming couplets.

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Date: 6/21/2016 1:08:00 AM
andrea, CONGRATS on your Loyalty win. SKAT
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Date: 6/1/2016 8:08:00 PM
wow Lovely Poem! Thanks for sharing!Love you in Christ!
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Date: 5/19/2016 2:50:00 PM
Loved it,thanks Andrea!
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Date: 5/4/2016 6:09:00 PM
Righteous win Andrea!!You have created such a clear, sweet, and lovely image in your delightful couplet of loyalty synonymous with "faithful" ....You have vividly described the attributes of my late husband....If this is your truth, you are one blessed lady!:)jill, a fan:)
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Date: 5/3/2016 11:08:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Beautiful poem, wonderful tribute to Loyalty. Congrats on your impressive first place win. Cheers, Brian
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Date: 5/2/2016 9:49:00 AM
Nice tribute to Joe and your marriage. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/2/2016 8:29:00 AM
A great congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/1/2016 7:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea...
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Date: 5/1/2016 5:30:00 PM
This is a beautiful tribute to Joe Andrea. Hope he reads it, you might get s ome chocolates or flowers. Con on your top win! ; )
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/2/2016 3:45:00 PM
ha. are you kidding. Ya can't lead some horses to water OR poetry!! (nor can you get them to buy nice chocolates)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 5/1/2016 5:31:00 PM
My kindle changes my words for no reason...I wrote Congratulations not con!
Date: 5/1/2016 2:32:00 PM
lovely deserved winner andrea
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Date: 4/27/2016 8:28:00 AM
Differently written about conjugal life. Nice piece.
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Date: 4/25/2016 1:24:00 PM
I'm smiling Andrea. Best wishes to both of you.
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Date: 4/24/2016 7:42:00 AM
Andrea, this is an awesome entry. Being faithful really counts for a lot these days :) Good luck for the contest
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Date: 4/23/2016 10:28:00 PM
Ah thats so sweet Andrea! Its wonderful to see as well! The poem is also so beautiful and flows well!
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Date: 4/23/2016 10:13:00 PM
Good understanding. Made for each other. nice Composition. Congrats n hugs. Anisha D
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Date: 4/23/2016 9:43:00 PM
Dear Andrea I know this man also lol that you speak of I've married his mirror image, my husband of 27 years now, he does not understand poetry at all but he loves me no matter what, and Id never change him in, I'm glad to be stuck with him, love your piece here I'll read it to my tom later, simply put this is just a perfect piece, good luck in the contest, and glad you enjoyed your visit to my site, take care cheri
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Date: 4/23/2016 5:26:00 PM
infidelity is a non-negotiable for me...i like your hubby's constancy, and this wonderful piece!...SOUPIE, SOUPIE!..huggs
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Date: 4/23/2016 3:24:00 PM
Very nice poem on loyalty. Good luck my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/23/2016 6:01:00 AM
The wealth of experiences you have shared with him surpasses all little things he might overlook! Wonderful couplet and wonderful COUPLE, dear Andrea!
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Date: 4/23/2016 4:57:00 AM
Nice one Andrea!!! He deserves a bow for earning such respect from his gal......
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Date: 4/23/2016 4:45:00 AM
Nice one:)
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Date: 4/22/2016 11:05:00 PM
We all have different ways of showing how much we care about one another. Happy you can make it work...lovely couplets
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