Faith That's Insane

Are all my prayers

Regarding you in vain?

Because you are walking

Around like you're insane.

Are all of my visions

Regarding you not true?

Because to this day

You have not walked

Through the door.

You are still walking on

The other side of the shore.

All I can do is keep praying

For you. I'm telling you

This is a hard job for me

To do. Everyone sees

The worst in you. That's

Why I feel sometimes

That all of this prayer

And what I see

Is insane, but my

Sight is limited

And God knows

Better. It's not

All in vain. I must

Have faith that's

Insane.



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Johnson Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 10:27 PM
emotion drives a verse 4 better or for worse we all suffer a little in our little hell world... let it out babe....Don thanks 4 your comment :)
Hilliker Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 2:41 PM
Cleverly written Rhyme about insane faith being possibly in vain. Great job.
Mehta Avatar
November 7, 2010 at 2:04 PM
Very awesome write on faith that is insane, Sharon
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