Faith

Like the rays of light abandon the sun at night - virtue spares faithful.

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Heidi Sands

Date: 3/24/2020 10:26:00 AM

Very nice! Well done :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/25/2020 12:26:00 AM

Thank you Heidi..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/23/2020 9:52:00 PM

Very interesting analogy, my friend. A fresh look at the subject. Bravo, Gershon. Hope you're well, Jenish!!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/25/2020 12:26:00 AM

I don't know whether these words spread what I intended to convey.. The rays of light never abandon the Sun at night.. So virtues also will never abandon the faithful in difficult time.. The first statement is not true.. So the comparison is also not true..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/23/2020 10:10:00 AM

True dearest, Jenish! Superbly written! Hugs xxx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 3/25/2020 12:22:00 AM

Thank you dear Demetrios..