Faith

Like the rays of light
abandon the sun at night -
virtue spares faithful.

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Heidi Sands

March 24, 2020 at 10:26 AM

Very nice! Well done :)

Jenish Somadas

March 25, 2020 at 12:26 AM

Thank you Heidi..

Gershon Wolf

March 23, 2020 at 9:52 PM

Very interesting analogy, my friend. A fresh look at the subject. Bravo, Gershon. Hope you're well, Jenish!!

Jenish Somadas

March 25, 2020 at 12:26 AM

I don't know whether these words spread what I intended to convey.. The rays of light never abandon the Sun at night.. So virtues also will never abandon the faithful in difficult time.. The first statement is not true.. So the comparison is also not true..