Faith

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One must not abandon faith.

As I lay in my bed lit room I mutter to myself silently "Powerless I feel" But, compelled to thrive Maddened by intruders Yet mastered fitfully my role in life Formless doesn't exist in my vocabulary I will quench onto faith for evermore

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/20/2018 2:47:00 AM

Faith in the light of being powerless about the control of power...

Charles Messina
Date: 7/20/2018 5:32:00 AM

I like that Kai, your words speak volumes! Thanks for the visit my friend...

Lyric Man

Date: 7/6/2018 12:16:00 AM

Charles.. I like your Faith and your determination to hold onto it!!

Charles Messina
Date: 7/6/2018 4:21:00 AM

Without faith one will surely fall...thanks Lyric Man!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/5/2018 2:51:00 PM

- We have all been there, those days where we wish we had been lying in bed, well buried under the carpet - It's about finding back to your own sense of happiness, my friend ... the joy of life ... never give up faith :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina
Date: 7/5/2018 3:31:00 PM

Hi Sunshine, I actually wrote this for a young girl who was going through some tough times...But I agree with you 100% It's about finding your way back to happiness, never give up :) Thank you, Anne-Lise Hugs // Charlie