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Fairytale Lovers

Eyes upon me in the night Tantalizing sweet delight His hands are soft upon my skin Searching through my dreams once again Held so tightly in his arms Melting gently from his charms Captured by my own beliefs Whispering wind flows through the trees Dance beneath the large full moon Hoping he will kiss me soon Romantic fantasies and vivid dreams Fairytale lovers or so it seems

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/6/2009 7:48:00 AM

Like a pastry chef, with deft expertise, you drizzle sweet caramels onto the tongue of the eye. Gosh ... golly! Love it!

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/6/2009 4:55:00 AM

Romantic fantasies is right, nice poem...Raul

Fathima Dawood

Date: 3/5/2009 12:20:00 AM

Awesome Lolita - thank you for the sweet comment on my poetry!! Well done Peace Fathima

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/4/2009 4:53:00 PM

Hmmm try reading Tam Lin Irish poetry I think you'll like it! Light & Love

Colin Mitchell Williams

Date: 3/4/2009 11:18:00 AM

Hi Lolita.... beautifully fluid... thanks so much for the comment

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/4/2009 6:13:00 AM

Gorgeous Couplet. I so do love those kinds of dreams and try to hold onto them all day (when I have them!). Excellent! Love, Shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 3/4/2009 5:19:00 AM

Lena, this littlerhyme is quite good and ever so visual as it truly speaks xof the fantasy I believe most of us have about others, especially those who touch us with words. This is simply lovely and like someone else had said to you, he is a very lucky man to be dreamed of in such a way. Michael

Steve Voorhees

Date: 3/3/2009 10:25:00 PM

So sweetly worded and an effortless flow...I like your over all sense of romance. There is a real tenderness to your writing that comes through sincere! Thank you for the compliments on my writing. The feedback is always appreciated. Mail me anytime, always up for new "SoupFriends"!! Much love, Steve

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/3/2009 9:54:00 PM

Lena - Very beautiful and inspiring poem of love - I just love the thought of love - I spent so many years full of hate - God what a wasted period of my life though I try to make the most of it now especially in regards to love -Loved your poem - God Bless, MJ

Ivan Beresford

Date: 3/3/2009 7:45:00 PM

Thank you for your reassuring comments on my recent poems. I love this poem it's the kind that come's from the part of your heart that just reaches out to people like myself, Whoever the man in your dreams is, He is one very lucky man indeed to have such a heart felt poem written about him. Keep up the brilliant work, Ivan.

Robin Maughan

Date: 3/3/2009 7:32:00 PM

So sweet ..very nice .. Robin Maughan