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Fairy Tale Truth

Childhood dreams lost in my mind, A fairy tale life I struggle to find. The Truth, the Life, the Way, I cannot choose today. We dream and scheme to plan our lives, Not hearing the true desires inside. We See it, Feel it, and challenge its honesty, Must every mile be filled with voracity? You think you know me, you think we’re close; While even me, in myself I cannot boast. This life in my mind is quite an odd story, How selfish am I to not accept glory? The questions of life I can’t comprehend, My Jesus; my god; who shall transcend? I am overwhelmed from dusk till dawn, Potential life will soon be gone. The truth is present, the answer is near, Jesus will lead me and make it all clear. Childhood dreams now fresh in my mind, A fairy tale life I one day will find.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/24/2008 10:41:00 PM
awe precious and adored- good write and thanks for your comments too!
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Date: 10/13/2008 11:58:00 AM
Very interesting write here, Guy. Personally, I much prefer reality which can also have a happily ever after ending ... smile ... when you get my age, just waking up is wonderful ... LOL ... Welcome to PoetrySoup and I hope to read much more of your writing!!
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Date: 10/12/2008 8:50:00 AM
This is an excellent poem. I like how the title resonates throughout the poem, and how the essence of Jesus is reinforced. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/10/2008 5:15:00 PM
a fairytale life indeed you will find, Jesus definitely makes the way clear, put him first and all other things will be added unto you, great write, take care D-nyce and welcome to the soup.
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Date: 10/10/2008 1:41:00 PM
He'll be there. God Bless. Vince
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