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Fairy Tale Castle

high on a hilltop
stands the castle of the wind
in fuchsia rose mists

enchanted fortress
with a broad moat surrounding
child's fairy tale land

palace of bright stars
when the crescent moon's shining
all indigo night

castle of the clouds
in brass sunshine of morning
when dreams have come true
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Y. Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 6:34 PM
Hi Evelyn, I enjoyed your ( fairy tale) haikus. I found it to be lovely and magical. Nice photo as well. Great job:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 9:27 PM
Hi Alexis, I'm delighted that you enjoyed my haikus, and the photo. Thank you very much for letting me know. hugs :) Evelyn
Rolland Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 1:23 AM
wonderful, i love the subtlity of images, great penning Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 12:46 PM
Thank you very much, Yann. :)
Ray Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 6:32 PM
this touches me deeply with longing....loved it
Buehler Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 9:46 PM
Thank you so much. :)
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