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Fairy Light

Full of beauty, full of light
Full of life, burning bright

Fairies live, they breathe and fly
They hold wonderful magic within their eye

The world of fairies can not be found
Not by anyone who wanders round

You must have heart and mind so keen
Then maybe…maybe they can be seen

They always choose the time and place
So wait and watch for any trace

The day may come when you see their light
Shinning, glowing, burning bright

Copyright © Steven Mossburg | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/16/2011 7:44:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Leighann's "Land Of Fairies" contest Steven. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Chiquitachiamaka Baity Date: 8/16/2011 7:08:00 AM wonderful write Steven....well penned....thanks for sharing....smiles!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/15/2011 2:00:00 AM wow! i love it Steve,..p.d. Login to Reply

Jack Ross Jr. Date: 8/6/2011 11:18:00 PM Terrific write mate...with love...old Jack Login to Reply

Herman Hoffman Date: 8/6/2011 10:54:00 PM iT IS ALMOST IMPOSSIBLE TO EVALUATE A POETIC WORK WITHOUT SOME KNOWLEGE OFTHE POET'S BACKGROUND-- I BELIEVE THIS IS THE WORK OF OF A COMPARATIVELY INEXPERIENCED POET, AND IF SO,IT IS A VERY GOOD EFFORT--THE ONLY NEGATIVE I CAN SEE IS THAT THERE ARE A FEW SMALL "STUMBLES" IN THE RHYTHM--A PROBLEM THAT IS COMMON WITH POETS UNDER 45 OR 50 YEARS OLD---i THINK IT JUST TAKES A LOT OF PATIENT RE-WRITING TO GET THERE. I CERTAINLY AM NOT CALLING THIS A BAD WRITE--jUST TRYING TO HELP---OLDHERM Login to Reply