Fairest Luna

Fairest Luna, hung so bright
Light iridescent unto night

Bring joyand wonder to young and old
Ageless and beautiful to behold!

As sun rules day infusing its light
His constant watch to keep you in sight

In granite pavilions you rest and sleep
An amazing splendor the world to see
~*~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Horne Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 3:41 PM
beautiful write, Audrey. I love reading your old and new posts x
Rhinem Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 7:50 PM
.... ~ I think that I shall be looking greatly forward unto, watching "Your Poetic Splendors" grow ~ Smile, I believe that "You" shall be a treasure someday, for many lives to behold...."My Love to You Always," John! ~ Smile, I shall see You again tomorrow and, until then, "Have A Very Beautiful Night, 'Precious Carey Audrey,'" Bye Dear!:) ~
Rhinem Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 7:45 PM
Smile ~ "Completely Beautiful" ~ "Yes," this seemed to be the perfect write -- So soft and sweet this reflection it seems, of a very beautiful soul ~ "Your Creativity & Verse, Are Taking Steps Towards Astonding Dear Lady!!!" ~ The images are brilliant and, leave the reader within such a peaceful and tranquil state of, thinking that "You Are Very Special" ~ ....Cont....
Freeman Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 8:23 PM
This is a beautiful flowing verse,Audrey. Thank you graciously for your gracious comment today. Agape, Moses
Freeman Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 11:08 AM
Graceful and beautiful is this is this poem's presentation, Audrey. Congratulations on it graceful presentation. Also thank you for your graceful comment today. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 7:37 AM
A magnificent tribute to Luna's "ageless beauty, Audrey! Really liked the imagery and rhyme as well. Best wishes for the contest! Love, Carolyn
Knop Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 7:27 AM
Nice tribute to "Godess Luna", Audrey! Enjoyed your write this afternoon and thank you for commenting on "Night Flight"...Have a nice week. Love, Gert
K. Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 5:57 AM
A beautiful write about the moon goddess--me too, I've been enchanted with it-- wishing you the best in the conetst and read your comment in my blog, sorry I just read it now-- no worries in not being able to join my contest--will be posting another one soon ;) --nikko :) enjoy your day!!
Arteaga Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 9:12 PM
aw i like this a lot, but then the moon goddess was always my fave...mostly cause of sailor moon lol! thanks for the comment i still love her too just haven't watched actual tv in a long while no time for it :c i pretty much get everything in boxset if im interested. and no worries i would like to finish that collab when ever hes ready :D
Belt Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 12:45 PM
Awesome write Audrey....good luck in the contest....Larry
Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 12:25 PM
This is a very pretty little poem about Luna. Good luck in the contest, sweet Audrey! LUv, Andrea
Palhegyi Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 11:34 AM
I enjoyed your poem. Great use of words.
Neels Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 11:09 AM
Audrey, I just love the images, best wishes for the contest as well.. Ps: totally agree with your take on being a child in today's world.. So time machine it is then :) thank you for the comment as well tc Wilma
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