Failure...Ha!

Some crumble at the breath of a wind or sudden drop of rain.Plucking false joys,or snorting 
ounces of pain.Because of ones dreams no more can see,failure is taken as decree.See in 
this life you may not know,you win,lose,pass,fail,die..or u chose to grow.So with this most 
are left bound in the worlds sins,only to stop and think then...Look what ive become take a 
look at me now,crying and analyzing their life avow.Not knowing what is an obstacle but an 
excersize,ment to build u stronger as you rise?So as for i myself and me....failure will never 
be.And why settle for comfort when i am free?So i will fly and defy above every eye,and 
when it is my time oh...i will shine!Thru every joy and pain my light will be seen.On every 
mountain top,upon every hillside.And as my light shines through the trees...i will dance!my 
victorious rhythm upon the clouds of eternity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/5/2009 8:38:00 PM
See in this life you may not know,you win,lose,pass,fail,die..or u chose to grow YOU ARE NOW MY FAVORITE I love your work keep writing it inspires me.....
Login to Reply
Date: 6/20/2009 8:48:00 PM
You are wise lady C= admirable; yeip, very few persons consider failure a victory (X-men's Apocalypse does xD); failure and obstacles, pain itself, they all are growth experience as you mentioned, and part of a cycle too; thanks a lot for the experience =)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/10/2009 9:17:00 AM
This Is Beautiful.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/7/2009 6:48:00 AM
Hi Rebecca thanks for your reply and so glad you led me to your writes reading poetry takes me away for while and I really liked this one, best wishes Ann.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/5/2009 7:46:00 AM
Smile~I can see "You Dancing There Now Dear Rebecca!!!:):)~Another wonderful write here, filled with inspiration for others I would say....And, as far as the depths of "Your" writings? All I have seen thus far is "Your Priceless Soul!!!":):)~Smile, keep writing~for "You" shall only get better and better...."Love & Warmth Always To You & Yours, John!!!":):) Smile, Bye ~
Login to Reply
Date: 6/5/2009 7:09:00 AM
Good write! Welcome to the soup! - jeremia
Login to Reply
Date: 6/4/2009 9:56:00 PM
Gallant endeavor ... the heart that never surrenders ... is the heart that will dry others tears. Bravo
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad