Bhavna Khemlani Poet Acrostic

Failure

Feels like the world and destiny is testing you,
Assuming you can simply overlook things,
Irrespective of always being genuine ,and never giving up
Like all great moments are dim, ignored, and forgotten;
Unless the world and destiny simply has the pleasure of testing your patience,
Repeatingly, that now you have to make a decision and recognize it is a phase,
Empowering those positive thoughts to erupt to sustain a noble empire of compassion.

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Bukang Liwayway August 3, 2012 at 2:54 AM nice poem...congrats **Mary**

Jayachandran Chakrapany June 12, 2012 at 1:28 AM beautiful ,nice poetic interpretation .thank you for sharing .jk

Shans Priya June 9, 2012 at 11:41 PM hi!! bhavna great thoughts about failure..inspirational... good work..

Pace Ink-U-Script May 10, 2012 at 9:47 AM Love this piece as well Bhavna!! Its a part of Life.

Maureen Lefanue March 6, 2012 at 8:25 PM Hi Bhavna, Thanks for your kind comment re my poem. Enjoyed your poem - failure is just a lesson in life. We all fail and that's how we learn to get things right [hopefully]. Love, Maureen

Lawrence Schrank February 11, 2012 at 12:13 AM To sustain the noble empire of compassion...beautiful..reason for endurance midst the brokenness..the only thing we take with us to what is next is the heart within us that has been nurtured by empathy and grace....thank you.. Lawrence

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 10, 2012 at 9:33 AM Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. ontinue to share words with luv and thankxxx for your sweet comment on my poetry luv..

Anne-Lise Andresen February 10, 2012 at 7:26 AM Wery good poem Bhavana, life goes on - good day and bad day my friend.Have a good one to day! - oxox love Anne-Lise

J Eliza James February 7, 2012 at 9:25 PM Found your page Bhavna And found an acrostic verse I did not relate the term to poetry Learning can came from Unlikely sources when one turns pages Right and left, the Poetry Soup pages Enfolding the knowledge I seek I never fail because I will always try again and succeed in the trying! wordancer

Karen Deeks February 5, 2012 at 9:37 AM Hello, this write is the type that the more I read the more I see. This starts of to me in a tone of things being not perfect but builds up to a if you take a positive attitude, things may be easier or improved. You have one of my favourite words here (says so much to me) nobel. A lovely write to encourage positivity... Karen

Sara Kendrick February 2, 2012 at 12:09 PM Enjoyed reading your very expressive work this afternoon...I am glad that I chose this one as one that I could read today..Those positive thoughts make the difference between a good day and a bad...Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara