Failure

And all it happened
As i feared
Turned into life
A nightmare
When i touched the flame
I burned down
All my ashes
Lingered around
Seeing the sky
Lying on disgust
Can never bring stars
Into your palm anigh.
Awake
And revive
From those ashes
And burn down those stars 
With victory of crashes.


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Situation Avatar
August 24, 2023 at 9:56 AM
Makes me think of the Pheonix.
Stark Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 3:47 AM
pheonix Always rising from the ashes Mending all her gashes
Robinson Jr. Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 9:19 AM
A very cerebral poem, Curie. Had to read it twice to divine my personal meaning hidden inside your muse. It was worth the effort. May the love light your path in life always.
Stark Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 10:01 PM
Thanks
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