Failed Disposition

Failed Disposition



Defining failure my disposition from you,
   never seemingly doing your right thing to do.
Internalized lost character, anger held within,
   left feeling I am the worst man amongst men.

Agonizing pains clarity as the truth is disagreed,
   drops fall upon drops in red rivers my heart bleeds.
Terrorized mentality stamped into catatonics state,
   running from fates destiny in between love and hate.



bmdavey@
02/07/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Nunez Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 3:51 AM
Dripping with angst. You write well of a sad situation full, of emotion. Impressive!
Davey Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 7:07 AM
Thank you so very much your comments mean there world
Vaso Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 12:58 AM
Failed disposition, but successful poem, I can very well relate to this! Great write!
Davey Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 1:57 AM
Thank you very much I am honored that you like it
Davey Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 1:56 AM
Thank you very much I am honored that you like it
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