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Failed Disposition

Failed Disposition Defining failure my disposition from you, never seemingly doing your right thing to do. Internalized lost character, anger held within, left feeling I am the worst man amongst men. Agonizing pains clarity as the truth is disagreed, drops fall upon drops in red rivers my heart bleeds. Terrorized mentality stamped into catatonics state, running from fates destiny in between love and hate. bmdavey@ 02/07/16

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Date: 2/7/2016 3:51:00 AM
Dripping with angst. You write well of a sad situation full, of emotion. Impressive!
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/7/2016 7:07:00 AM
Thank you so very much your comments mean there world
Date: 2/7/2016 12:58:00 AM
Failed disposition, but successful poem, I can very well relate to this! Great write!
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/7/2016 1:57:00 AM
Thank you very much I am honored that you like it
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Brian Davey
Date: 2/7/2016 1:56:00 AM
Thank you very much I am honored that you like it

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