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Faery Lady

Oh what can ail you, faery lady? With eyes as blue as the sea Truly you are not alone, As ravishing are thee Your soul seems withered and callous Your heart is surely dying lying amongst the garden leaves While pools of blue are crying Like the cries of a dying bird     Echoing through the trees I hear you moan and ache so deep I feel you long to be Oh kind sir, I’m trapped here Never to love again For every soul I’ve come to care I’ve brought to their bitter end A knight, he came upon me Atop his brilliant steed But when I said I loved him I planted an evil seed He made me lovely things To show me all his care I stroked his hair so gently But the curse it would not spare His eyes grew dim and weary As dark as a winter’s day He breathed my very essence And vowed to forever stay Intoxicated and wilting The rose waned from his cheeks He climbed his brilliant steed no more And love no longer speaks Oh kind sir, I really wish These words I speak were real But a faery’s tongue is ages old And thus your fate is sealed Now forever resting In loves eternal sleep That is why WE lie here In this garden where I weep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/7/2014 11:47:00 AM
Alvah, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/30/2014 6:25:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Alvah- I choose your first great written poem - I like it a lot - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2014 9:31:00 AM
You are too kind, thank you for taking the time to read my first poem! I'm looking forward to reading yours as well.
Date: 9/25/2014 6:28:00 PM
Alvah, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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