Kim Rodrigues Poet Haiku

Faerie-Child -Hc

one ballerina
tiptoe-twirls with two pink shoes
three sweet pirouettes

Turning the key of a music box - one...two...three.
Lovely, tall and full of grace - true faerie-child esprit.

3/1/2019
Charliecoup Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Eve Roper March 7, 2019 at 1:22 PM Congratulations on a great Haiku & Couplet,Kim, containing a lot of feeling and imagery. ... Hugs Eve ~`* Kim Rodrigues March 8, 2019 at 6:17 PM Thanks so much, Eve! Hugs...Kim!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 7, 2019 at 9:18 AM I love it Kim! :) Congratulations on your top win! xomo Kim Rodrigues March 8, 2019 at 6:16 PM Thank you, sweet Maureen!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 7, 2019 at 4:45 AM - Congratulations on your win, Kim :) - Kim Rodrigues March 8, 2019 at 6:16 PM Thank you, dear Anne-Lise!

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2019 at 2:55 PM glad to see this gem place high. Congrats, Kim. Kim Rodrigues March 8, 2019 at 6:13 PM Thanks so much, Andrea!

Charles Messina March 6, 2019 at 1:23 PM Love this one, Kim. I pictured that little music box turning. Well-done! Congratulations on your 1st place win. Charlie Kim Rodrigues March 8, 2019 at 6:13 PM Thanks so much, Charles!

Andrea Dietrich March 1, 2019 at 7:17 PM This makes me recall my old music box with that tip toe swirling ballerina. Utterly charming, Kim. Kim Rodrigues March 1, 2019 at 8:28 PM Thanks so much, Andrea! Hugs...Kim

Judy Ball March 1, 2019 at 2:13 PM Excellent symbolism. I could see her turning on her tip toes. Love it. God Bless, JB Kim Rodrigues March 1, 2019 at 8:27 PM Thank you, Judy! God bless you too!

Caren Krutsinger March 1, 2019 at 9:47 AM Beautiful. For the first time I remembered once wanting to be a ballerina. Kim Rodrigues March 1, 2019 at 8:27 PM Thank you!

Line Gauthier March 1, 2019 at 9:06 AM Bravo, Kim. An absolute FAVE. Kim Rodrigues March 1, 2019 at 8:26 PM Thanks so much! Hugs...Kim

Demetrios Trifiatis March 1, 2019 at 8:36 AM Enchanting poem! Surely top placement dearest, Kim! Kim Rodrigues March 1, 2019 at 8:25 PM Thank you, my friend! Hugs..Kim

Sara Kendrick March 1, 2019 at 8:15 AM Reads like a good contender in the contest. I can picture the scene. We all can dream of being a ballerina even if not ballerina material. Thanks for dropping by. Sara Kim Rodrigues March 1, 2019 at 7:39 PM Thank you, dear Sara!