Jaymee Thomas Poet Verse

Fading World

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Ice
caps melt,
quick
as fate
we ignore,
Her wrath
no
surprise
we reject
confronting them,
our faults, stunts,
footprints 
of 
carbon,
grow as we 
delay;
no,
hope leads
change.


Sunday, March 12, 2023
Waltz Wave Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Daniel Turner March 17, 2023 at 9:51 PM This is very good, Jaymee. Hard form, great message very clever wording. Emile should like this one, I do:)

Paul Callus March 13, 2023 at 9:47 AM Climate change and global warming will get worse unless human activities are positively controlled. You have tackled this tricky poetry form with apparent ease. Well done. // paul