Fading Away

my eyes bleed tears of sorrow
my heart bleed tears of pain
and it seems it rains daily
slowly takin my soul away
so how am i to be
if soon there will be nothing left of me....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/23/2010 11:27:00 AM
this is simple, but it's very relaxing to read and I like the style. YOur soul raining away by the tears, great analogy! LUv, andrea
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Date: 2/23/2010 7:05:00 AM
Can feel the saddness
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Date: 1/17/2010 11:13:00 PM
I can relate to your poem my sister has hit a verry verry hard time also and the situation knocked us all for 100 never mind 6, if you go to church, get in a small group or something get praey and wise counsol, we are and it makes all the difference that God is all poweful and there is no situation that he can not sort out nothing too small nothing too big. I pray the Lord will be with you through this time and uphold you and keep you astrong, Amen
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Date: 1/17/2010 4:44:00 AM
This poem is aptly titled. Depression is a dark force that you reveal so well in this short piece. It can consume if you allow it to. The cure has to come from within ourselves. For me it was discovering my life had value and their was more to life than what I had experienced. This was a very thought provoking poem as you can hopefully tell from my post.
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