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Fading Away

As you are growing stronger everyday Oh, how it hurts to see myself fading away. Dedicated to the ones who hurt us. Like a moment of sunshine that is covered by darkness. I'm Fading Fast. Like a shimmer of color that is washed away by the beating of the tide. I'm Sinking Slowly. Like the sparkle in a childs eyes, that is crushed by disappointment. I'm Losing Faith. Like the first time your heart skipped a beat, and then you got to know him. I Cannot Trust. Like the first time you went to leave, and then disappointed yourself. I'm Giving In. Like the one time you knew who you were, and then lived for someone else. I'm Fading Away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/9/2009 5:01:00 PM
awwwww don't G R O W...have an adventure! Light & Love
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Date: 8/9/2009 4:23:00 PM
Welcome to the soup Angela! Thanks for the comment on my poetry! I applaud your work, I feel your pain. Best of luck, keep writing! ~Jen~
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Date: 8/8/2009 8:29:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup! Great Write....Sabrina
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Date: 8/8/2009 5:16:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Angela. I wish you the very best in your writing. Excellent write. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/7/2009 7:12:00 PM
Very good. I enjoyed it. TL
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Date: 8/7/2009 4:23:00 PM
Good write totally connected to it =) - eddie
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Date: 8/7/2009 4:03:00 PM
We have all felt this way before, good job
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