Fade Away

Futility Always Dances Ending Any Welcome Aspirations Yearned

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Date: 10/10/2009 11:48:00 AM

Nice use of the acrostic form for a thought provoking poem. These one word lines flow and had to take some planning to come up with. Thank you for sharing your thought with us and for your kind comment. Keep up the good writing! Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/25/2009 11:16:00 AM

Magnificent! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/23/2009 11:17:00 PM

Oh, long time since I saw this kind of writing!! Thanks for the experience!! The sentence is deep, shoveling all the way into my belly button, yeah!!=D

James Faulkner

Date: 5/21/2009 5:25:00 PM

very well done. this is a really nice write. -love and peace:james

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 5/21/2009 8:15:00 AM

Nice acrostic Paul, thanks for stopping by to comment my write, appreciated! Kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.

Christopher Higgins

Date: 5/21/2009 7:54:00 AM

Love the layout of the piece and the message is spot on..good work.