Fade Away

Futility

Always

Dances

Ending

Any

Welcome

Aspirations

Yearned
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 10, 2009 at 11:48 AM
Nice use of the acrostic form for a thought provoking poem. These one word lines flow and had to take some planning to come up with. Thank you for sharing your thought with us and for your kind comment. Keep up the good writing! Karen
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May 25, 2009 at 11:16 AM
Magnificent! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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May 23, 2009 at 11:17 PM
Oh, long time since I saw this kind of writing!! Thanks for the experience!! The sentence is deep, shoveling all the way into my belly button, yeah!!=D
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May 21, 2009 at 5:25 PM
very well done. this is a really nice write. -love and peace:james
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May 21, 2009 at 8:15 AM
Nice acrostic Paul, thanks for stopping by to comment my write, appreciated! Kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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May 21, 2009 at 7:54 AM
Love the layout of the piece and the message is spot on..good work.
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