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Factor of Life

My only litmus test  is my brain
My heart stopped when I saw the real nature of the factoid
Can I be seeing you for the first time ?
You are the breath I take
My feeling of expression is not only my wealth but my nature
I am a robot to your love 
Your kisses are what my lips crave 
Please be real and not a figment of my imagination 
The existence of air and water refresh my soul
I can only see your vision if you let me 
Please take my hand
The car seems to be falling over the cliff 
Life is so fast 
This is dying 
I love it 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/15/2014 1:51:00 AM
deeply profound and well written welcome to soup congrats on being featured hugs
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Date: 11/11/2014 7:49:00 AM
"I am a robot to your love", thrilling!
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Date: 10/25/2014 9:02:00 AM
Dying to live.. Awesome!
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Date: 10/19/2014 1:00:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Christopher - I choose your first well written and deep poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/18/2014 8:59:00 PM
Hi Christopher, I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! Great way to get it going with an excellent piece! Best wishes. Pandita
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