Christopher Remele Poet Ballad

Factor of Life

My only litmus test  is my brain
My heart stopped when I saw the real nature of the factoid
Can I be seeing you for the first time ?
You are the breath I take
My feeling of expression is not only my wealth but my nature
I am a robot to your love 
Your kisses are what my lips crave 
Please be real and not a figment of my imagination 
The existence of air and water refresh my soul
I can only see your vision if you let me 
Please take my hand
The car seems to be falling over the cliff 
Life is so fast 
This is dying 
I love it

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Shadow Hamilton November 15, 2014 at 1:51 AM deeply profound and well written welcome to soup congrats on being featured hugs

Jaafar Sadig El Waad November 11, 2014 at 7:49 AM "I am a robot to your love", thrilling!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2014 at 1:00 PM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Christopher - I choose your first well written and deep poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos October 18, 2014 at 8:59 PM Hi Christopher, I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! Great way to get it going with an excellent piece! Best wishes. Pandita