Facing Dark Clouds

Out of her shower
Not just a pretty flower
Sweetness is power
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Richards Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 12:45 PM
I do think this is my favorite one so far!! Great job...good luck in Carolyn's contest, Robb!! :)
Mehta Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 8:16 AM
A good haiku with fine images
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