Faces of the Ocean

Grey waters in storm
Green waters in the sunshine
Golden waves at dusk
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Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 11:56 PM
I love how you chose the three colors and represented them for different things, Isaiah. Nice to see again on the winners list
Jones Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 1:31 PM
This is awesome Isaiah ..congratulations on the recognition
Poet Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 12:13 PM
Very nice imagery in this haiku Isaiah !Congrats on the win.
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 22, 2013 at 7:01 AM
Isaiah congrats on your fine haiku. Warm Smiles, Connie
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July 21, 2013 at 8:17 PM
Isaiah :-) thank you for the wonderful haiku. It's a delight having you support my contest. If you have time please enjoy my latest blog titled "BEYOND SUFFERING" all my winners are announced in order. Goodnight ~ always & forever **LINDA
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April 28, 2013 at 4:41 AM
Yip... that's the Ocean for you in a 'haiku' nutshell-- faces go well with the theme. Don't you just love haiku-- nice and short, but actually not that easy to write I guess. Thanks for stopping by my wall and thanks for encouraging words. Talking about walls.. our pictures are sitting at the top of the home page together.. I wonder how they decide who goes on?? Your parents gave you a great name btw.. where abouts in the US you based.. we moving to Texas soon-- we have green cards.
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2013 at 12:43 AM
this is nice and colorful!! Congrats for your win.
A   Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 8:01 PM
Isaiah, a nice winning Ku' poem... Congratulations in Heather's lovely haiku contest. xox~ Linda
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 2:18 AM
Just lovely! Congrats on your wonderful win!
Jones Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations Isaiah .. great win
Guzzi Avatar
April 23, 2013 at 10:15 AM
3 separate parts, different days different times, haiku [ in the moment ie: 1 moment a snapshot, a frozen bit of time] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Jones Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 7:11 AM
Beautiful Isaiah. ...Donna
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April 15, 2013 at 1:55 AM
I love the reflection.of that green in the sea....the greyish of water reminds me of sails in a tempest and those golden waves at dusk..ow a real shimmer at moonlight.You described a face in full make up lovely. By the way i managed some cowboy haiku at last..tnks for the inspiration : )
A   Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 12:03 PM
Isaiah, good luck in the contest. nice shades of colors from the deep , I enjoyed stopping by to read your poem. Take care and have yourself a nice day. xox~LINDA
Richards Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 11:22 AM
Ahh.........all the muti-colors of the ocean wrapped in one beautiful haiku!! Nicely done!
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