Faces of Loneliness

The face of loneliness is hidden by a mask
A mask of smiles and laughter
What can not be seen by the naked eye only few know
That the face of loneliness is bottled inside

The face of loneliness can take many shapes 
From the shy girl in the corner
To the one with the most friends
The least suspecting people are just the ones who hide it the best

The face of loneliness banging to come out
But you keep it trapped inside of you like a prisoner
A prisoner locked in a small, dark room
You keep it in for so long you don't know what's true

The face of loneliness is hidden by a mask
A mask that very few can see past
But when one sees past it and opens up what no one else has
The face of loneliness is cracked
Like a mirror shattered on the floor
And you don't feel so lonely anymore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 2, 2013 at 11:18 PM
Sarah, .:-) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the HOME PAGE.... always~ LINDA
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October 23, 2013 at 8:16 PM
Sarah, awesome deep win.. LOVE -- SKAT
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October 22, 2013 at 10:18 PM
Sarah, ,love the win..PD
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October 21, 2013 at 11:24 AM
Congrats on your winning placement, Sara! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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October 21, 2013 at 8:14 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, sarah
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October 20, 2013 at 6:50 PM
so much truth in your words..congrats on your win :)
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October 18, 2013 at 6:50 PM
Sarah...congratulations on your win...I think you said this very well...and is very often the case...well done..
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October 15, 2013 at 10:34 PM
Hello Sarah, this is deep, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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October 15, 2013 at 8:55 PM
Sarah, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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