Faces of Loneliness

Quiet corners of the night
hold the secrets of sadness.
Lonesome souls without the light
cascading the waves of madness.

Forgotten by everyone they know
with their humanity torn.
Days are torture and nights so slow
they wish they were never born.

Lonely eyes will gaze at you;
foreheads lined with worry.
We pass them quickly by it's true;
pretend we're in a hurry.

Lost souls that cannot comprehend
what turned their tears to rust.
This road has just a dark dead end;
But for grace that could be us.



written October 15th for contest "Faces Of Loneliness"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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October 23, 2013 at 8:17 PM
Deb, awesome deep win.. LOVE -- SKAT
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October 22, 2013 at 10:19 PM
Sweet win Deb... congrats...LINDA
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October 21, 2013 at 11:21 AM
Congrats on your winning placement, Deb! Love and blessings, Rhonda
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 8:16 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, deb
Jones Avatar
October 18, 2013 at 6:53 PM
Tears to rust before anyone notices....great visual....hope you are happy deb.....congratulations..... :-)
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October 15, 2013 at 9:33 AM
Beautifully written Deb, the sad thing is ,people that feel like this by themselves but put their game face on for everyone and hide it.Anne
Sirak Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 8:03 AM
Sad with a lonely cry in each word. The ending is perfect.
Mehta Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 7:18 AM
Well written expressions on loneliness, Deb
Sivey Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 6:53 AM
And we move on even through the darkest hours my friend! This is an amazing write! I truly enjoyed reading this outstanding poem this morning! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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October 15, 2013 at 4:19 AM
- We human beings close our eyes and go by .... - Well written, Deb! - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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