Faceless

FACELESS

faceless they embrace
arms wrapped around neck and waist -
figure of lovers

8/27/2017

lovesenryu

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Joseph Soper

August 28, 2017 at 5:41 AM

nicely penned Kim.... I think we used to have those salt and pepper shakers...

Kim Rodrigues

August 28, 2017 at 7:09 AM

LOL...thanks, Joseph!

Darren White

August 28, 2017 at 12:45 AM

Wonderful senryu, so muc imagery in those three lines.

Kim Rodrigues

August 28, 2017 at 7:09 AM

Thanks so much, Darren <3

Gregory Richard Barden

August 27, 2017 at 8:34 PM

What a gorgeous Senryu, Kim - just adore this! <3

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2017 at 8:35 PM

Thanks so much, Greg!

Dean Wood

August 27, 2017 at 8:15 PM

This is a great image Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2017 at 8:32 PM

Thanks, Dean! :)

Arthur Vaso

August 27, 2017 at 7:59 PM

ah, I liked this!!!!

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2017 at 8:31 PM

Thanks, Arthur :)

Akkina Downing

August 27, 2017 at 5:16 PM

Oh I love this one. Fabulous work Kim :)

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2017 at 5:56 PM

Thanks, Akkina!

Joanna Daniel

August 27, 2017 at 9:16 AM

Very nice picture, Kim:)

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2017 at 10:34 AM

Thanks, Jo :)

Vijay Pandit

August 27, 2017 at 8:59 AM

Lovely theme!

Kim Rodrigues

August 27, 2017 at 10:35 AM

Thanks, Vijay!

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