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Faceless

i stood there faceless

my hands were tied

condemned and speechless

whistled offside

shocked, betrayed

silent

call it a raid

violent

the blind still leading the blind 

thanks, i’ll wait for my own kind

betrayalrhyme

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Andrea Dietrich

November 25, 2014 at 11:59 PM

I really had to study this one out. I think you are saying something profound here and I want to get it! at the end, it seems you are saying that those in whom you should have been able to trust had betrayed you, so you will wait for others like yourself, those who are not blind or ignorant. Am I getting it? I just love how it is so short and packed with meaning. I have only 13 more comments to do, but maybe I will just see a few more and then call it a night!! thanks for everything tonight.

Poet Destroyer A

September 9, 2014 at 6:33 PM

I did, I did, fav that one poem.... ((You see where it read, A sweet notch on my list :)LINDA)) <---- that was the code.... The poem will be on my favs for a while, so it's seen by other poets... But, if you want it to remain on my fav list for good, ADD A UNICORN VERSE somewhere IN THERE...LOL......

Poet Destroyer A

September 9, 2014 at 6:54 PM

OMG.... I'm just trying to ruin your poem... LOL... Don't add nothing about a Unicorn to your poem.... hahahahahahha! I meant to say.... nanana-na Batman.... see ya Robin

Maurice Yvonne

September 9, 2014 at 6:49 PM

ok I'll bite what is a unicorn verse or are you being literal.

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