Face Up

Putting up a brave face,
                     when bleeding heart shows no trace.











contest name- rhyme battle- round six
one couplet and ends rhyme
written on 19/4/14
sponsor- Juli michelle
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Davis Avatar
June 21, 2014 at 5:38 PM
Dr. Upma Such powerful meaning and truth in so few words. Deep and touches the heart. Thank you for the great comment on my I Did It My Way poem.
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April 22, 2014 at 8:10 PM
This is good and I mean real good. Great for the contest. Thanks for sharing and good luck..... Lucilla
Vaso Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 12:50 AM
wow, with few words you spoke volumes!!!
Curtis Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 6:31 AM
Supported by Gods good grace..... So much said with so few words This might be a Winner, good luck Dr.Upma
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