Notes About The Poem

Face the Music

My summer garden revealed gay pansies with faces,
As the scarlet tanagers flew roundabout singing.
A rapt audience, the flowers beamed in all places,
In the hour that golden butterflies were winging!

I sat myself on the porch swing, already in motion,
And I smiled to see pretty faces turned up to me,
As I smothered joyful in sunshine sound explosion,
In an irresistible pause for midmorning's beauty!



Written on 12/31/2020
For: Podium placing promise(2) Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 3:10 PM
Ahh!! Awesome winner. Congrats. Sara
Buehler Avatar
January 6, 2021 at 8:01 PM
Thank you for the joyful comment and congratulations, Sara.
Ligon Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 1:02 PM
"Sunshine sound explosion." Beautiful tickling of the senses throughout your poem!
Buehler Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 3:26 PM
You have my deepest thanks. Luckily the joys of happy hours often linger in memory. The best of the New Year to you and yours.
Theraven Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 7:21 PM
Evelyn, Beautiful as any day or morning in devotion could be. I was so glad to face the music in your poem, truly. Happy new year's wishes Evie. -Richard
Buehler Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 8:06 PM
Some mornings are just perfect, Richard-I wouldn't change a thing. Thank you so much for your appreciation. Have a blessed New Year. :=)
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