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Face of Fluidity

seeking it's level swirling within a droplet deep countless cascades

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/8/2011 4:59:00 AM
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Enjoyed this one for it is thought provoking..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Thanks for your kind comments on my work for they are always greatly appreciated..Sara
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Kash Poet
Date: 12/17/2010 10:49:00 AM
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Congratulations John on your 2nd place win.
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 12/17/2010 8:26:00 AM
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Congratulations on this well deserved second place win in the contest, john
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 12/17/2010 7:54:00 AM
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One thing I've always noticed about fluids as that they seek to be "level." Quite an astute observation explained so beautifully in you haiku, John. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 12/17/2010 7:23:00 AM
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Congrats John on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water.. enjoy with luv..
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Harry Horsman
Date: 12/16/2010 10:00:00 PM
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excellent haiku, love this. Harry
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/16/2010 9:52:00 PM
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Very nice, John. Congratulations on this top honor. LUv, Andrea
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Rick Parise
Date: 12/16/2010 9:48:00 PM
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CONGRATS TO YOU~TRULY ENJOYED THIS ONE~Rick
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Robert A. Dufresne
Date: 12/14/2010 6:02:00 PM
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an ocean unto itself huh John? good write and thought. Thanks for your comment. That kind is as important as the ocean in your droplet.
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Doris Culverhouse
Date: 12/14/2010 3:07:00 PM
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Enjoyed reading your thoughts today...ESP poet
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