John Beam Poet Haiku

Face of Fluidity

seeking it's level                                                                                                      
swirling within a droplet                                                                                             
deep countless cascades

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Sara Kendrick February 8, 2011 at 4:59 AM Enjoyed this one for it is thought provoking..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn..Thanks for your kind comments on my work for they are always greatly appreciated..Sara

Kash Poet December 17, 2010 at 10:49 AM Congratulations John on your 2nd place win.

Dr.Ram Mehta December 17, 2010 at 8:26 AM Congratulations on this well deserved second place win in the contest, john

Carolyn Devonshire December 17, 2010 at 7:54 AM One thing I've always noticed about fluids as that they seek to be "level." Quite an astute observation explained so beautifully in you haiku, John. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 17, 2010 at 7:23 AM Congrats John on your big win in Rick's contest with this exciting entry on flowing water.. enjoy with luv..

Harry Horsman December 16, 2010 at 10:00 PM excellent haiku, love this. Harry

Andrea Dietrich December 16, 2010 at 9:52 PM Very nice, John. Congratulations on this top honor. LUv, Andrea

Robert A. Dufresne December 14, 2010 at 6:02 PM an ocean unto itself huh John? good write and thought. Thanks for your comment. That kind is as important as the ocean in your droplet.

Doris Culverhouse December 14, 2010 at 3:07 PM Enjoyed reading your thoughts today...ESP poet