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what’s with the serious face any point we need to prove thoughts in narrow grooves self-blocking divine grace deadlines missed, what fun does not yet life continue as vibrant life breath renews ignited by the spiritual sun countless have been our births spurred by our hearts desire fleeting illusions we still aspire stifling our innate bubbling mirth 04-May-2021

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Date: 5/4/2021 12:27:00 PM
An enclosed rhyme is not easy; you have written one that is flawless.
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Date: 5/4/2021 6:42:00 AM
Enclosed rhyme, very well done.
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Date: 5/4/2021 7:05:00 AM
if you are happy, I am happy!

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