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Face In the Mirror

what’s with the serious face
any point we need to prove
thoughts in narrow grooves
self-blocking divine grace

deadlines missed, what fun
does not yet life continue
as vibrant life breath renews
ignited by the spiritual sun

countless have been our births
spurred by our hearts desire
fleeting illusions we still aspire
stifling our innate bubbling mirth

04-May-2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 12:27 PM
An enclosed rhyme is not easy; you have written one that is flawless.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 6:42 AM
Enclosed rhyme, very well done.
Seeker Avatar
May 4, 2021 at 7:05 AM
if you are happy, I am happy!
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